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DevJackson
Mr. Fix It
Posts: 375
(1/17/07 4:19 pm)
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Basic Description - Hellsinger Angel
Really, all you need to do is elaborate on the following sentence enough to be able to paint an at least vague picture in my mind.

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"Harry ran with his dog."


I already know what I want described, so go ahead and start adding description. You'll probably get this in one try, but hey, it's basic.

Edited by: DevJackson at: 1/17/07 4:26 pm
HellsingerAngel
Vash Hellsinger
Knight in Shrouded Armour

Posts: 1596
(1/17/07 10:56 pm)
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Re: Basic Description - Hellsinger Angel
It was a cool and crisp autumn day. The small breeze rustled the leaves as they crackled like a fireplace. It was a beautiful day outside and Harry had decided to take his german shepard, Jervis, for a walk. The wind rushed past the two as they raced through the park, multicoloured leaves parting as the pair wizzed by. Crunch, crunch, crunch!

DevJackson
Mr. Fix It
Posts: 379
(1/18/07 3:00 pm)
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Re: Basic Description - Hellsinger Angel
I wanted more of a description added to the dog and the owner, but that's a decent description of the surrounding area.

HellsingerAngel
Vash Hellsinger
Knight in Shrouded Armour

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(1/18/07 3:10 pm)
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Re: Basic Description - HellsingerAngel
((Gotta be sepcific, man!))

It was a cool and crisp autumn day. The small breeze rustled the leaves as they crackled like a fireplace. It was a beautiful day outside and a familiar, freckle faced boy had decided to take his husky german shepard for a walk. Harry ran around the park with his dog, his cheery expression and youthful exuberance giving him an aura of what it ment to be young. The dog, Jervis, danced about playfully with his owner, his black and brown coat glistening with the perfect sheen. It was almost too perfect, looking like a scene from a movie or a novel. The wind rushed past the two as they raced through the park, multicoloured leaves parting as the pair wizzed by. Crunch, crunch, crunch! It was a picture perfect moment...

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