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Psychic Witch Mandrake
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(5/16/06 10:30 pm)
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Brahmin Yao Lin
Name: Brahmin Yao Lin

Age: 14

Grade: 10th

Appearance:
Half Chinese, half Indian, Half Black, he has a very different appearance. His hair is black as night and is fine, and his skin is the color of milky tea. Chocolate brown with flecks of amber are how his eyes appear. A short lad, he is only 5’3” and is very scrawny. Brahmin's mousy appearance and wirey frame give people the impression that he is a pushover, but his gifts, if used appropriately, could make him a force to be reckoned with. Some people think that Brahmin is not totally human, on account of his freaky eyes, but Brahmin doesn't care, and would rather keep believing that he is all human, just really crazy and different.

Personality:
Calm for the most part, but erratic at times, Brahmin suffers from deep bouts of depression and highly sensitive mood changes. Anti-depressants don’t work either; they just further aggravate him. When he too anti-depressants, like Zoloft and Prozac, Brahmin would either become and emotionless shell, or balls-to-the-wall insane. He keeps to himself, and tries to remain pleasant at all times. Not getting emotionally attached allows him to keep his emotions in check.

Special Powers:
Emotional Split Off
By trying to control his erratic emotions, Brahmin developed the strange ability to split. By this, whenever he feels an intense emotion, this emotion “splits off” from him, and thus Brahmin, while this copy is out of him, lacks this emotion. Example: if he becomes intensely angry, then this anger splits off and the copy is he in the purest form of anger, and Brahmin looses the ability to feel anger as long as the copy exists. This copy can last no longer than one minute and forty seven seconds. After this time, the copy will fly back into Brahmin, and the kick back will cause him to get ill. If the copy does not fly back into him immediately, then the longer it is away from him, then the more he will get sick.

Mood Music
Brahmin also has the unique ability of causing music to appear in the background. He, at this moment, cannot control it. The song that appears depends on his mood, and he must experience an extreme emotion to have it happen. The song may appear when a copy splits off, after the split off, slightly before, may happen when nothing has split off, or may not happen at all. Brahmin has no control over the song. He can neither turn it on or off.

History:
Brahmin’s father was very well off. He owned several textile factories that supplied both India and southern China with fine silks and other luxurious fabrics. Ashmiir Gupta, Brahmin’s father, was the owner of these factories, and was a very intelligent man. He was also very talented, and possessed a golden singing voice. One of Brahmin’s fondest memories was his father singing. Brahmin’s mother, Waverly Yao Lin, on the other hand, was the dame of a Chinese whorehouse, and she herself was a very rich woman. An empath, she had the ability to sense people’s emotions and slightly influence them. Brahmin’s parents met when Ashmiir visited China on a business trip, and he decided to stop in for some “company.” Brahmin’s father’s status did not allow him the to acknowledge Waverly, so he could only visit her and his son on business trips, and Brahmin took his mother’s family name.

Brahmin had a wonderful childhood, up until the age of eight, when one of Ashmiir’s competitors sabotaged a factory that Ashmiir was visiting. The factory went up in flames, and Ashmiir’s father was never seen again. Waverly’s powers allowed her to feel this happen, and shortly after Ashmiir’s death, Waverly herself died from grief. Brahmin was shuttled from relative to orphanage, and thus developed a very unstable character. Finally an orphanage in America accepted him, and while there he heard about a school that housed other kids with unique abilities and troubled pasts.

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Sample Post:
The book Brahmin was reading was quite a page turner. The supspense was spell binding, and was perhaps better than any slasher movie he had seen. As he turned the page, he felt the slight 'click' go off in his head which signified that something strange was about to happen. Brahmin closed his eyes and took a deep breathe. As he counted back from ten, he tried to focus on being as calm and serene as possible. After saying zero, Brahmin opened his eyes and looked around. He was the only person in the library, and there was no sign that anybody other than him had been there. Brahmin continued to read on. However, not even into the first paragraph, the fierce sound off screeching violins crashed against his ears, and the building crescendo matched the anticipation Brahmin felt when he read the book. Brahmin knew that there was nothing he could do, so he just let the music play on, hoping that it would end soon. If not, then there would bee one angry librarian to answer to.

Brahmin read on, his pulse quickening with each new word. On the next page, the stalker jumped out from the shadows and grabbed the girl by the neck and quickly gagged her. Brahmin jumped fiercly out of schock at this blood curdling scene, and felt a pressure in his chest that felt all too familiar. He looked up and saw an even more mousy form of him with highly disheveled hair. Oh no, thought Brahmin, with this out of me I can't possibly enjoy the rest of this book. Plus, he'll cause a huge ruckus in the library and have me kicked out.

"Ahhhh!" said Sacaredy Brahmin, "Another me! Ahhhhh!!!"

"Buy I'm you! Wait, don't go!" Brahmin ran after his other half, and as he trailed off into the dark corridor, he swears he can hear the furious "Shhs!" of a librarian.

Edited by: Psychic Witch Mandrake at: 5/18/06 11:09 pm
NightShadeZero22 
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(5/16/06 11:15 pm)
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Re: Brahmin Yao Lin
^^ well since im new at this dont take my words as final till it gets the offcial stamp but, i think its really good, id like to see a bit more on the history, a bit more in depth with your own character and not his family.


Also i believe it is required to have a RP preview thing...i forget the name but yeah.... ^^;

so History and the preview thing :rollin



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Bow2Gaijin
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(5/16/06 11:27 pm)
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Re: Brahmin Yao Lin
Gotta bold your titles, and write a bit more history. Plus you need the sample RP post like nightshade said.

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(5/17/06 1:28 am)
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Re: Brahmin Yao Lin
Seems good to me, although I doubt I actually have the power to approve people... so, to be safe rather than sorry, I'll wait for someone else to approve it...

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(5/17/06 2:48 am)
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Re: Brahmin Yao Lin
Bold your title for Relationships section. Check out the sample character sheet if you need to.



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HellsingerAngel
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(5/17/06 7:35 am)
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Re: Brahmin Yao Lin
One minute and fourty-seven seocnds? That was weird...Why one minute and fourty-seven seconds exactly? Anyways, you can go off and RP now, but you can't use your powers until you're fully accepted. Adios!

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(5/18/06 11:23 pm)
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Re: Brahmin Yao Lin
Half Indian, Half Chinese and Half black o.o Well, you are accepted because, well you are a nut XD Good job, Welcome to the hell that is MHS XD j/k

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