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Granom
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(12/1/06 9:54 am)
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Dot.Hack//Shattered Exsistence
This is a story that I am writing about Dot.hack G.U. It will cover mostly Tri-edge and the main Plotline characters. If I get enough responses on this chapter, I will write another one.




Dot. Hack: A Shattered Existence.

Characters: Tri-edge, Haseo, Ovan, Phyllo, Shino, (other characters that are put in because of me.)

Disclaimer: I do not own dot hack or any of these characters, but I do own anything that I make up in the story.


A day in the life of Tri-Edge.

It had been a long fight, but I have my opponent on his last 500 hit points, I know how I can end this I thought as I grinned evilly, and with that I did. Then concluding my thoughts I screamed DATA-DRAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As I hit my opponent with one of my most powerful attacks. Then seeing as I had defeated my opponent, I just stood there and listened to him/her dying scream as he/she de-materialized and vanished, I never knew what happened to them, I just knew that my opponent never showed his/her face in my world again. My previous kill has been my 40th Pkk today. I looked where my opponent was standing, on the ground there was a pile of items, useless things really, but I enjoy taking something as a trophy for each of my kills.

I sift through the items, a rune claymore( A BIG sword with many ancient symbols on it.) , a spirit ocarina(a teleporting item), a pair of swift boots, an item that increases the players agility by 90 points, mythril plate, a blue armored shell that offers a boost of 50 defense points to the player, adamantine leg-plates, green colored leg protection that offers a boost of 70 points to the player, a pair of white gloves , a pair of white boots, a amulet of attack, and last but not least a guild symbol with the symbol of the league “Twilight Brigade” on it. I took the rune claymore, the spirit ocarina, the pair of swift boots, and the mythril plate.

Then I looked through everything left on the ground, a symbol of the twilight brigade, and a few other useless items. Wait! The twilight brigade? I thought what do they want me for? Well, they could only be after me if they are searching for the key to the twilight. That could only be……THE TWILIGHT BRACELET! They mean that yellow thing that I found in some ruins? What would they want with that? Then that means that I have both the key of the twilight and the key of eclipse with me! WOW if that is what they are after then I must not let them get that, because in that they may have a chance of defeating me! This area is no longer secluded now thanks to that punk that I PKKed , the tracking device in his symbol has probably gone off by now! I have a plan as to how to deal with this problem but first I must leave here! And with that I concluded my thoughts, lifted my eclipse bracelet in the air, and then gate-hacked out of the area.

Bender5000
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(12/18/06 11:00 am)
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Re: Dot.Hack//Shattered Exsistence
cool. I am a dothack fan but not that much. make the story more obvious as to what happens. I think a second chapter would be awesome

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