Name: Genji Asuma
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Age: 16
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Grade: 10th
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Apperance: Genji's apperance is that of a body biulder with class. He's of African decent and was born and raised in Japan.He's 6'6 and he wieghts 194 and is built like an ox. He wears a basic Kimono with sai. He has a white head band which he wears as a symbol of love and peace. He wears blue Kimono top and his sai( pants) are white. He has a scar on his back which is huge and was given to him as a punishment for a crime sometime ago.
Ok, due to my sources on Japanese culture, I learned the name of the pants are called hakama, not sai. A sai would be the weapon

Personality: In a single sentence it could be said as this
" A man in search fopr knowledge is the strongest man of all. A man who knows too much is full of it!!!"
Genji is a clown in search for the truth regardless of what the cost is. Which is why he is often a lovable guy to basicly be around. He always tries to help out a friend and dosn't care if it cost him his body , mind , and soul in the process.

Genji's major drawback is he's a flirt. He looks good and is built even better and he won't hold back on telling anyone about it either. He's always one to be the center of attention weither he wants it or not.
Another flaw for him is that when ever time he uses his powers they mess with his head. He becomes over emoitonal and cannot stop vioces from entering his head uncontrollabley.
These voices can sometimes influence how he reacts to situations. It takes a huge strain on his mind soul and heart.
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Special Powers:


Dance of the butterfiy:

Genji summons all his energy into energy made butterflies and launches them as he dances like projectiles.
They can also be used as shields and other ways as well.
Each butterfly requires minimum energy and only last for
a grand total of 5 min. However each one can be told to home in on a specific energy.

Ok, here we go.

This isn't a bad power, I kinda like it, but it is way too vague.

1. By summoning all your energy would mean he could barely move afterward...I'm not sure if thats what you mean or not but still.

2. How many butterflies can he summon at max out at one time? As it is now, it could be one, ten, or a million, a million is not going to fly by the way. Right now he could summon all those butterflies, wrap the million around his opponent, cutting off air circulation and movement, its not going to work for a starting power.

3. How durable of a shield are the butterflies? Do they dissipate after being flicked or something more powerful? It doesn't specify how strong they are and could bring up complications.

4. What is the ratio for butterfly to energy thing? What exactly is minimum? How many can you summon until you're completely spent?

5. How do the butterflies perform as projectile weapons? How sharp are they, how fast do they move? Details Details.


Sealing Alchemy:


Genji gathers all his energy around him and that within his body
and performes a dance with such brillance that all his energy is made visible in a blinding blue-green aura around him.
By touching anything of basic mack up he can change its
make up thus chaning its make up. He then alters it to become whatever it is to be needed.
However he cannot even use this powers on many things simply because it waste so much energy to use.
He is unable to do much with the energy except altering a few Metals, wood, and stone and rock.

When using this power tattoos on his body appear on his body. These tattoos represent a type of sealing that problay took place on him once. However whenever he uses these powers it appears as though the seal is being broken away bit by bit.


1. Again, you say all your energy. This means it would deplete you to alter one object, most likely not what you're looking for.

2. I need to know what he can and can't do, not because it wastes too much energy. Saying he could turn a human head into a rubber ducky, but it'd be too costly to be convenient won't work. He can't be able to trasmute a human or something similar as a last ditch effort. Be more specific.

3. Also, I need information on the sizes of objects, is there a limit to the size of things? Do bigger things expend more energy, again, more details.

History:

As a young man he was shipped across seas to Japan out of fear. When he was born he was cursed with a powerful aura. He grew up as a mear begger and thief. One day he saw a man getting jumped and had to jump in and help. As he arrived the attackers feld having seen Genji's Aura around him out of fear. Genji confused had no control over his Ki or aura so was scared. Once his aura powered down he was on his way to leaving. The man who he had helped was a master in the sacred arts of self defense. Happy Genji begged the man to become his apperentince. The man was happy to oblige. However, when Genji was accepted he was less then happy. His
new master gave him two fans told Genji of the Kamikaze.
The Kamikaze style or Silent Wind technique revolves around the movement of the user.

Upon hearing this at frist Genji was furious and angry. He only practiced the technique so he would have a place to stay for a while. However a while became years and the years turned to my life. On Gins 14 birthday he had mastered his own energy and the Kamikaze style. Upon this the man gave Genji his lfe savings hoping that Genji would get more use out of it then he would. Genji however barely mastered the technique befor his master would die. Genji having no family or relations. Went all country until he heard of a high school for people like him. In a moment he had danced his self fans and all. To the doors of MHS.

Ok...the way of him meeting the man is so incredibly illogical and...corny. If the man was a master of some secret martial arts, there'd be no way he'd get mugged by a common street thug. It just doesn't make any sense in anyway shape or form. Theres much more you could do with this. If you're intent on him getting mugged, at least change it to the man wanted to test him or something. Also...I wouldn't beg an old man to become his apprentice after getting pimp slapped by the common street thug.

Also, if you intend to keep the fans, they must be for ornamental value only. If used as a weapon, it would need to consume a weapon slot.

Relationships
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Mortal Enemy: None
Friends: None
Good Friends: None
Family: All dead
Likes: women
Dislikes: stuck up people

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Example role play*


Genji was walking around the streets of a dark feeling city. He was in a Kimono and had all his belongings in his backpack. He never really expecting to be attacked at this time of the day. However, as he turned the next corner he could see a girl run right into his chest and saw her fall. Genji bent over to hold her up when she looked up. She appeared to be afraid of something as if she was running. Genji then bent down to help her out. He had a suave smile on his face and he began to talk to her in a clam vioce.

"Hello there young lady you seem to be in a bite of trouble. Would you like my assitance??" Genji kept his suave movements and posture up. The young woman fumbled and got up yelling the entire time that it made it hard for Gin to understand her.
"Please sir you must leave. You dont know what these men are capable of. Thier after me and I don't know what they plan on doing when they catch me. "
Genji noticed the look in the young womans eyes and he was furious he began to shine with the brillance of an angel as he flexed in his Kimono.
"No woman should be forced to do the bidding of anyman against her own will. This is truly a smack in the face to me as a man."


Then two men of about Genji's height appeared with knives in thier hands and yelled to the woman. "DO you really think we'll just let you walk away from us." The other one noticed Genji and laughed while saying.
" What is this she got some fag in a Kimono to try to protect her." He began to laugh along with the other one.
It was then that Genji began to look really pissed.
"How dare you call me a FAG!!!" It was then that Genji's body began to glow with black tattoos over his entire body.
The men looked at him with a look of fear in thier eyes.
"What the hell is he??? He must be one of those demon boys that I keep hearing so much about. " The frist man rushed Genji with his knife. Genji then clapped his hands together and then put them agianst the ground. In a flash of light his Tattoo's began to glow and then a small piece of earth rose up and tripped the guy running at him. Then Genji's tattoo's disappeared. The seconc man looked at him with complete fear in his eyes. "You son of a bitch you won't get me!!!"
He pulled for a gun at the same time Genji pulled for his fans.
Gin then waved his fans in the mans direction and the man fell several feet back. Genji then advance the men and checked thier pockets an took thier money.

"This is payback for what you have done to others!!"
The men got up and ran away. The lady then rose to bow to Gin. "Thank you oh so much for helping me I don't know how I can thank you. " Genji then simplly walked up to her put his hand on her shoulder and nodded.
"Theres no thanks needed. "
Gin then ran off the oppisite direction of the woman. The woman then began to smile. "I wish I had his name maybe I should call my girl and tell her about it. " She reached into her jacket to pull for her phone and then realized she had niether her wallet or her phone was gone.

Genji was walking away and threw away a wallet into the garbage while saying. "Well none of them had any good money. Only got 800 bucks outta that one."
Genji whistled and walked off into the distance.

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As a parting note, run this through spell checker to get rid of all the typos and grammer mistakes. Makes the app look neater and saves me the trouble of slapping myself.

Edited by: Kobita at: 5/19/06 9:00 pm