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DevJackson
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(1/17/07 4:32 pm)
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Intermediate Grammar - Sora12
Simply correct all of the grammatical errors in the following paragraph:

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Oh My god! Steve yelled he couldn’t believe what was happening and he looked in awe and he cracked his knuckles in nervousness he hadnt seen anything like it before. the it mentioned was a huge monster ten feet tall and weighing around five hundred pounds. He looked down at his paper and looked at the list one banana, three oranges a sword some throwing knives, and a pair of boots. he was ready


I know, random paragraph, but whatever works.

Just a note, a couple of those could work a few different ways, but I’d like to see the less common way someone would write it. This includes a semi-colon somewhere. You're not done until you fix everything.

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(1/17/07 5:24 pm)
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Re: Intermediate Grammar - Sora12
"Oh my god!" Steve yelled. He couldn’t believe what was happening; looking in awe he cracked his knuckles in nervousness. He hadn't seen anything like it before. The "it" mentioned was a huge monster; ten feet tall and weighing around five hundred pounds. He looked down at his paper and looked at the list: One banana, three oranges, a sword, some throwing knives, and a pair of boots. He was ready.




Think that's it, could be wrong though, I never use semi-colons @.@



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