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Lucian Wilheard
Name: Lucian Wilheard

Age:14

Grade:9th Grade

Appearance: Lucian is about 5'4 and his form is considerable slim is extremely fit. His skin is tanned from playing outside for prolonged amounts of time. Messy black hair hangs over his eyes most of the time constantly in the way of his vision. Light-blue eyes hold a innocent trait to them they hold a certain curiosity to them. He is handsome in the face with alluring features, yet they haven’t quite grown any real strength into them.

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Personality: Lucian is a tad bit unpredicatable. Sometimes ranging from the moronic to the considerablely deep, talkative, unbelievablely trusting, friendly to a fault most of the time, and nice. He’s naive to the greater evils in this world yet will fight back if is his only option or cornered unless another person is being attacked. Slightly self-conscious about his wings that’s why he keeps them hidden from strangers. He is a very open-minded person, yet he lives by his own subject to change personal code he has envised to live by in this world. Sometimes he gets confused when his line of what is right and wrong gets blurred.

Special Power:
1. Flight: He has the ability to fly by making his wings appear on a cue.

2.Crosses Of Judgement: He can summon up to three heavy massive floating blue-glowing crosses that hover about him attacking whatever he sees fit. This power spawns from his hertiage and drains Lucian energy as a result from it. They're mostly used as blunt attacks, but the edges on the cross can become bladed for more rare-lethal confrontations. The crosses themselves are seven feet-tall vertical, six feet across, one foot and a half in diameter on each piece.



History:
Lucian always felt a little out of place it was a mystery to how he even came into this place. It sounds cliche, but he was left on the doorsteps of an orphanage in a basket wrapped in snugly a white blanket on a deathly cold snowing day. Being brought into this world by a stranger who just happened to answer a door is a very odd way to start a life.
The woman took notice how the baby laughed when she picked up his basket lifting him from his secure resting place still wrapped in the blanket several inconspicious white feathers fell from the bundle of joy floating gently down to the hardwood floors. The woman spoke with care in her voice as she lifted a note from the basket with his name on it” My aren’t you a little angel? Lucian..,” she moved the blanket a tiny bit more to discover she was right.

Lucian had it hard growing up without parents add in the fact, which you’re another worldly entity it gets a little weird. His early years were very simple. He was feed by nurses watched over by nuns and preachers at nights and kept away from the other children as a baby. The little dipping in the holy water for good faith early in his life was slightly discomforting also redundantly. They sheltered Lucian as a kid always delicately encouraging his actions with praise no matter how small. A simple feat like putting letters in the right squares got more attention, then another orphanage’s first steps.

Lucian was very smart he learned how to walk, talk, read and write talk at a very young age. He was very perceptive of the world around him and very eager to learn about it. Reading any book he could find laying around the orphanage, but he was more interested in the people around him. He always did keep a very open mind to religion to the dismay of the church.

Lucian had talked his way into meeting some of the kids his age it didn’t quite go as expected. They teased him about the wings calling him names till him learned how to fly with them afterwards Lucian quickly became popular shortly afterwards learned he could make his wings disappeared briefly, then reappeared by using his mind. He played with them getting an idea of how people reacted to each other they did little to shield their intentions there are only kids. Some of them was adopted, that’s when Lucian started to feel the sorrow of lost and his own dissociate of himself from the others. He soon begin to seek out others like him different, then he heard of this school.
Relationships
---------------
Mortal Enemy:
Hates:
Dislikes:
Friends: Amber, Hawthorne, Hitomi, Datu, V, Kanami.
Good Friends:
Family:
Likes:
Dating:
Undecided:Yakoutio, Sakura, Kenta, Ryoko, Winston Bales, Grey, Art, and Kane.

EXAMPLE ROLE-PLAYING POST:

The bus was rocking back and forth across the bumpy road. He sat there in the back as he watched the variety of people around him. One man was seating across from him he didn’t smell so pleasantly at the end of the booth. The man’s clothes were filthy they had numerous stains on the fabric noticeably the polyester overcoat it hung over his other curiously dampened clothes. He turned to look at Lucian his face was clustered with dirt revealing small patches of his white skin and his blacked lips started to pull back to reveal two rows of what could be consider teeth most of them yellow others black, some of them were rotten out. There was something else stuck in his teeth several what only could be described of hideous gunk resided in each tiny space between his teeth. His breathe lingered out of his mouth it was a disgusting foul breath of liquor and several days’ old garbage, which might explain the gunk.

Lucian blinked twice in the response to man’s least, then savory smile. A slow smile spread across Lucian’s lips in return to the man. Sliding a bit closer to this new person, he just had met his curiosity growing. Lifting one finger to his chin he kept it there for a moment has his blue eyes observed this odd being once more, before extending his hand to the man has he spoke with a solemn tone to his voice speaking to him with dignity, “Hello my name is Lucian Wilheard. What would yours be?”

“My name is Abraham Lincoln!!!! Pleased to meet you ya! Lucian.. What a very odd name..!” Abraham said with a smile upon his face, “You got to watch out for those UFO’s they’ll abduct you know. They’ll do all kinds of strange things to your head. I can still hear them in my head..,” Abraham pointed to the side of his head with his finger, “There telling me you’re a vice nice person. I can see you have a very vibrant aura around you. I know these things!,” He nodded his head vigorously as his hand latched on to Lucian’s shaking it very hard. Happy to find somebody who didn’t believe him to be a nut.

Lucian tilted his head accepting Abraham’s gracious and overzealous notions by this time several of the people around him seemed to be staring at them,“ Nice to meet you Abraham. It’s an honor to meet you. You seemed very perceptive. Where are you going maybe to meet your family?” he asked naively.

Abraham was at first taken by the compliment of being called perceptive of his world, then taken by sorrow from the mention of his family. A brief moment of clarity occurred in his head, “I’m alone Lucian in this world. I messed up a long time ago, before the aliens took me I had a daughter,” more like a bit of clouded clarity, “ I haven’t seen her in ten years, since the signing of the Emancipation Proclamination in that awful house in Canada. Her name is Angie Lonwits..” There seem to be another pause and he looked sad.

Lucian was writing something on his notebook he had gotten for school, then he folded it hotdog style while listening to this old man. The bus suddenly came to a stop the passengers jerking slightly it was Lucian’s destination. He gave a soft sigh standing from the booth he gave Abraham a slight bow, “I’m sorry Abraham, but this is my stop. I believe you to be a very nice man Abraham, but you’re confused. I believe if you find your daughter and with a little help you might be able to find more clarity,” he extended his dirty hand once more in a shake, which Abraham shook.” It was very nice to meet you.”

“It was very nice to meet you to Louie.” Abraham said as he watched Lucian make his way to the front of the bus. He looked down at something in his hands it was a neatly folded of paper it was slightly dirty from his stained hands. Grimy fingers lifted the side of the notebook paper reading it: “Abraham here’s something to help you out and find your daughter. It’s a list of directions to a place to help you. The first would be instructions to a church there’ll be a priest who will help you from there. Hand him this piece of paper. He’s a very nice man won’t try to convert you and help you contact Angie. I hope the good in you will take this letter into consideration. Also, this is something to help you.” There was another paper neatly folded under the notebook paper it was green and had several Abraham Lincolns printed on them.

Edited by: VxChronicles at: 12/30/06 9:12 pm
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Name: Lucian Wilheard

Age:14

Grade:9th Grade

Appearance: Lucian is about 5'4 and his form is considerable slim is extremely fit. His skin is tanned from playing outside for prolonged amounts of time. Messy black hair hangs over his eyes most of the time constantly in the way of his vision. Light-blue eyes hold a innocent trait to them they hold a certain curiosity to them. He is handsome in the face with alluring features, yet they haven’t quite grown any real strength into them.

i49.photobucket.com/album...neko13.jpg


Its good.

Personality: Lucian is righteous when need be, but is shy and a bit timid. He’s naive to the greater evils in this world yet will fight back if is his only option or cornered. Slightly self-conscious about his wings that’s why he keeps them hidden from strangers. He is a very open-minded person, yet he lives by his own personal view of the world sometimes he gets confused when the line between right and wrong gets blurred.

Good~

Special Power:
1. Flight: He has the ability to fly by making his wings appear on a cue.

Simple, and clean. Just the way I like it ^_^

2. Holy Crosses: He can summon up several massive floating blue-glowing crosses that hover about him obeying his commands to either attack. The crosses can point themselves into the ground around Lucian to create a shield of holy energy to defend against a sizable attack. They can be also used as a attack by swinging them through the air.

Limitations; where the energy comes from, and how long do the crosses take to fade or what can trigger the fade.


History:
Lucian always felt a little out of place it was a mystery to how he even came into this place. It sounds cliche, but he was left on the doorsteps of an orphanage in a basket wrapped in snugly a white blanket on a deathly cold snowing day. Being brought into this world by a stranger who just happened to answer a door is a very odd way to start a life.
The woman took notice how the baby laughed when she picked up his basket lifting him from his secure resting place still wrapped in the blanket several inconspicious white feathers fell from the bundle of joy floating gently down to the hardwood floors. The woman spoke with care in her voice as she lifted a note from the basket with his name on it” My aren’t you a little angel? Lucian..,” she moved the blanket a tiny bit more to discover she was right.

Lucian had it hard growing up without parents add in the fact, which you’re another worldly entity it gets a little weird. His early years were very simple. He was feed by nurses watched over by nuns and preachers at nights and kept away from the other children as a baby. The little dipping in the holy water for good faith early in his life was slightly discomforting also redundantly. They sheltered Lucian as a kid always delicately encouraging his actions with praise no matter how small. A simple feat like putting letters in the right squares got more attention, then another orphanage’s first steps.

Lucian was very smart he learned how to walk, talk, read and write talk at a very young age. He was very perceptive of the world around him and very eager to learn about it. Reading any book he could find laying around the orphanage, but he was more interested in the people around him. He always did keep a very open mind to religion to the dismay of the church.

Lucian had talked his way into meeting some of the kids his age it didn’t quite go as expected. They teased him about the wings calling him names till him learned how to fly with them afterwards Lucian quickly became popular shortly afterwards learned he could make his wings disappeared briefly, then reappeared by using his mind. He played with them getting an idea of how people reacted to each other they did little to shield their intentions there are only kids. Some of them was adopted, that’s when Lucian started to feel the sorrow of lost and his own dissociate of himself from the others. He soon begin to seek out others like him different, then he heard of this school.

o.o Woah....Good stuff.

Relationships
---------------
Mortal Enemy:
Hates:
Dislikes:
Friends:
Good Friends:
Family:
Likes:
Dating:

EXAMPLE ROLE-PLAYING POST:

The bus was rocking back and forth across the bumpy road. He sat there in the back as he watched the variety of people around him. One man was seating across from him he didn’t smell so pleasantly at the end of the booth. The man’s clothes were filthy they had numerous stains on the fabric noticeably the polyester overcoat it hung over his other curiously dampened clothes. He turned to look at Lucian his face was clustered with dirt revealing small patches of his white skin and his blacked lips started to pull back to reveal two rows of what could be consider teeth most of them yellow others black, some of them were rotten out. There was something else stuck in his teeth several what only could be described of hideous gunk resided in each tiny space between his teeth. His breathe lingered out of his mouth it was a disgusting foul breath of liquor and several days’ old garbage, which might explain the gunk.

Lucian blinked twice in the response to man’s least, then savory smile. A slow smile spread across Lucian’s lips in return to the man. Sliding a bit closer to this new person, he just had met his curiosity growing. Lifting one finger to his chin he kept it there for a moment has his blue eyes observed this odd being once more, before extending his hand to the man has he spoke with a solemn tone to his voice speaking to him with dignity, “Hello my name is Lucian Wilheard. What would yours be?”

“My name is Abraham Lincoln!!!! Pleased to meet you ya! Lucian.. What a very odd name..!” Abraham said with a smile upon his face, “You got to watch out for those UFO’s they’ll abduct you know. They’ll do all kinds of strange things to your head. I can still hear them in my head..,” Abraham pointed to the side of his head with his finger, “There telling me you’re a vice nice person. I can see you have a very vibrant aura around you. I know these things!,” He nodded his head vigorously as his hand latched on to Lucian’s shaking it very hard. Happy to find somebody who didn’t believe him to be a nut.

Lucian tilted his head accepting Abraham’s gracious and overzealous notions by this time several of the people around him seemed to be staring at them,“ Nice to meet you Abraham. It’s an honor to meet you. You seemed very perceptive. Where are you going maybe to meet your family?” he asked naively.

Abraham was at first taken by the compliment of being called perceptive of his world, then taken by sorrow from the mention of his family. A brief moment of clarity occurred in his head, “I’m alone Lucian in this world. I messed up a long time ago, before the aliens took me I had a daughter,” more like a bit of clouded clarity, “ I haven’t seen her in ten years, since the signing of the Emancipation Proclamination in that awful house in Canada. Her name is Angie Lonwits..” There seem to be another pause and he looked sad.

Lucian was writing something on his notebook he had gotten for school, then he folded it hotdog style while listening to this old man. The bus suddenly came to a stop the passengers jerking slightly it was Lucian’s destination. He gave a soft sigh standing from the booth he gave Abraham a slight bow, “I’m sorry Abraham, but this is my stop. I believe you to be a very nice man Abraham, but you’re confused. I believe if you find your daughter and with a little help you might be able to find more clarity,” he extended his dirty hand once more in a shake, which Abraham shook.” It was very nice to meet you.”

“It was very nice to meet you to Louie.” Abraham said as he watched Lucian make his way to the front of the bus. He looked down at something in his hands it was a neatly folded of paper it was slightly dirty from his stained hands. Grimy fingers lifted the side of the notebook paper reading it: “Abraham here’s something to help you out and find your daughter. It’s a list of directions to a place to help you. The first would be instructions to a church there’ll be a priest who will help you from there. Hand him this piece of paper. He’s a very nice man won’t try to convert you and help you contact Angie. I hope the good in you will take this letter into consideration. Also, this is something to help you.” There was another paper neatly folded under the notebook paper it was green and had several Abraham Lincolns printed on them.


Wicked Sauce.



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Edited by: NightShadeZero22  at: 9/11/06 8:38 pm
VxChronicles
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(9/11/06 6:40 pm)
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Alright he's now one year older and a grade up.

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(9/12/06 4:43 am)
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Your second power Holy Crosses, first off...

Holy Powers are under the locked powers, so unless it is very creative, and done very well it isn't going to be approved.

That being, let me tell you the things I noticed that are wrong with it.

First off, it says it can block several attacks, yet it can be held up for five minutes, there is a serious inconsistancy with the way that is pu. Especially if you consider 1 round in a heavy weight boxing fight is 10 minutes, that is half the round. So not only is it not consistent, five minutes is by far to long. Unless you were trying to say several attacks, or five minutes, whichever came first. That could makes sense, as though someone didn't attack right away.

Secondly, your sheild is doing to many things, it is burning the attacker with holy fire per se and it is blocking an attack. Now, if this power were to be approved, at a later date as one of your upgrades you could add that it burns someone with this holy fire when they are blocked by an attack.

Third, you are able to attack with the crosses. This is another thing that is added, making it be able to do to many things. Sheild, or attack, one or the other, though in the future, if you wish, you can always upgrade your power to allow both block and a sheild.

The last thing about the power, is the several crosses. Give me a number here. Several can be taken to far.

Now, a question I am asking. Where did you get the idea for your characters power, Holy Crosses.

I know it seems like I am being picky, but Holy powers are supposed to be locked unless very creative and very well done, so we are very strict about that.

Though for good news, the rest of your character looks very good.



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VxChronicles
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(9/14/06 12:05 pm)
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
They are more bladed by the way Merciah. Hehe, didn't know about the post limit thing either I'll post on the board for now on.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard
No worries, I just wanted to let you know, because if you are able to get through most of your early posts through character creation, you wont even notice the post limit, which is usually th idea. I just hadn't thought about it untill we were talkingabout I think your fourth change, I wish I had thought about it sooner, so I say sorry about that.

Okay, now, to the power. You say hree massive crosses. In that case, can you give dimensions. Because one person could think a massive cross is a five foot long cross, while another person could argue massive means the size of an oil tanker that sails across the atlantic



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VxChronicles
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(9/17/06 3:30 pm)
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Let's make them about seven foot in height and five feet across. It would be a little difficult to fit a oil tanker anywhere in the school. Besides, chucking a oil-tanker cross would be a bit to much over-kill.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Okay, I guess that can work, the only extra detail I need is there diameter. Also, make sure you add it to your power description aswell.



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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Diameter?

Edited by: VxChronicles at: 9/19/06 12:39 am
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Ah, sorry sorry sorry. I haven't been able to get back to this. I've been really busy in and I haven't been on the board for a few days. Forgive me. What I ment, was the thickness of the parts. Which would be the diameter.



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Re: Lucian Wilheard
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Edited by: Drake Hayden at: 9/25/06 7:54 pm
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Four feet Merciah. Posted on a different name so delete the drake hayden post.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Okay, Ummm, maybe I am reading the way I wrote this wrong, or I am giving a bad explanation of what I am asking. So I'll give an example.

Get two pencils together. Make a cross.

The length of the verticle pencil would be the height.
The length of the horizontal pencil would be the width.
The thickness of each pencil seperately would be the diameter.
The diameter could understandably be different for each part, horizontal and verticle.

You saying four feet in diameter would be like holding a pencil that is as thick as it is long, or basically a big square with lead.....

I hope that explains what I was asking.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard
The height is seven feet vertical, the pencil intersection through the middle would be five feet and the thickness is 3 feet on each. I hope that clears everything up.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard
OKay, yeah, I understand what you're saying, but let me show you what I am seeing through what you are saying. Keep in mind, this is drawn to scale.



This is what your cross would look like if it were simply yellow. The diameter I have at 3 feet for both the verticle and horizontal section.



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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Seven vertical, six horizontal and let's make the diameter two feet would that be good? If not what would you suggest to make the crosses less blocky.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard


I want it to look like that if that makes any sense.

Edited by: VxChronicles at: 10/2/06 12:58 am
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Re: Lucian Wilheard
After going back through it still looked blocky at 2 feet in diameter. I would suggest at the most a foot and a half. It begins to have more shape at that diameter.



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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Alright a foot and half it is.

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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Yeah, it came out to be that shape more or less at about a foot and a half. If you could add the dimensions onto the power description. I'll go ahead and accept it after you have added the necessarry description to the power.



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Re: Lucian Wilheard
Alright edited the description so should be good unless I missed something.

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