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Madayja Hernandez
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(1/19/07 11:32 am)
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Madayja Hernandez
Name: Madayja Hernandez

Age: 16

Grade: 9

Appearance: Madayja has slightly tanned skin. Her long straight brown colored hair hangs down to her thighs. Her fringe usually reaches her nose but is always pushed to the side so it can’t get in the way of her brown eyes. To make sure her hair stays back Madayja clips it back. Usual attire for Madayja consists of clothes that hug her slender body. She owns a lot of short skirts but her favorite one to wear is a red plaid one. Pants are never an option for Madayja because she hates to wear them. When it comes to shirts a basic black tank top is the kind of thing she wears. She hates loose clothes. Whatever color skirt she wears Madayja wears high heels that are the same color to match. Madayja prefers to allow her hair to hang down but sometimes if it is hot she will tie it up.



Personality: Madayja always has to be the center of attention and she will do anything to be it. She tries to steal the light from others and won’t stop until she does. This is all because of the lack of attention her dad gave her when they she was growing up. Madayja isn’t very good at hiding how she feels about anything. It is very easy to see how Madayja feels on her face and her body language. When she gets sad she gets very vulnerable and she cries really easily. Little things can push her over the edge and she can become very angry very easily. Madayja is a very promiscuous girl. She is overly affectionate to everyone she meets and loves to flirt. Another thing that Madayja loves is conflict. Stirring trouble is one of her favorite pastimes.

Special Powers
Sandstorm: Madayja can create the illusion of a sandstorm. The radius of this power is 25 feet. The fake sandstorm comes from Madayja so she is not in it she is just on the outskirts of the storm. It does not move with her it stays in one place and she can’t move it. The sandstorm is thick enough so no one can see her so she can run away without people knowing. The power only works for about 10 seconds before the illusion fades away.

Bat Wings: Madayja can make bat wings sprout from her back. The wingspan is 6 feet. They look like the wings of a bat but they are completely black. She can’t use them to fly but they do elevate her jumping. The highest Madayja can jump is 10 feet. She does this by flapping them after jumping to help her get more height. She can bring the wings out at different times but the time that she has them out for has to add up to 1 hour.

History: Madayja was born in Mexico City and she came from a poor family. She was an only child and her parents worked as much as they could to try and support a child. They knew that where they were living at that time would not be good to raise a child at. The family tried to cross over to the United States when she was five but her mother didn’t make it. She stayed back in Mexico while Madayja and her father went to live in Albuquerque New Mexico.

Her father had a stable job and was bringing in enough money for his daughter to go to school. It was something that was very important to him. He wanted the best life for her and he wanted her to have a decent education. He had to work so many extra hours that he never got to spend a whole lot of time with Madayja which was when she developed the want for the attention of people around her.

She never really made friends at school. They used to tease her because she was poor. It always got to her and Madayja always used to come home and cry. Her father always tried to comfort her but he couldn’t stop her from crying. To try and distract herself from her school life Madayja started to do lots of the house work. She was doing most of the house work by the time that she was ten. She claimed it was because her father had to work so much and she just wanted to help as much as she could.

One day her first power appeared accidentally when she was being harassed by a group of men on her way home from school. She screamed very loudly and accidentally made a small sandstorm appear. It was only small and they could still see her but they were so scared of the power that they didn’t bother going after her when she began to run away. After turning thirteen Madayja took up some part time jobs. She was working every day after school and as much as she could on weekends.

Her father picked up alcoholism and a drug addiction and so he began to work less and Madayja had to miss a few days of school to help pay for his new habits. Teachers at the school always worried about her but Madayja assured them that she was fine. When she found out that she had missed to much school that they were going to have to hold her back a grade Madayja stopped going for the rest of the year and worked all the time. Her father abused her all the time physically, emotionally and sexually but Madayja just took it for two years before she finally had enough.

One day after school Madayja went home like always and her father was working. She took everything that was hers and left. She heard a little about Manga High School when she was moving around and started trying to get there when she was fifteen.

On the way she found out she had another power and that was to make bat wings out of her back and they helped her to jump higher. She was walking along the side of the road and suddenly wings sprouted out of her back. At first they scared her and she couldn’t get them to go away. But after she calmed down she could get them to go away. She tried to fly with them but couldn’t. She could use them to jump higher and she thought that it would only be a little while before she could fly with them so that was why she started to train them more. Then she made it to buffalo when she was sixteen and started at Manga High.

Relationships
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Mortal Enemy:
Hates:
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Good Friends:
Family: Mother and Father
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Dating:

EXAMPLE ROLE-PLAYING POST:

Madayja moved up to the gate of manga high. So this is the school. She thought. Her eyes went wide as she looked to every detail that was able to be seen from her current position. A brown and white backpack was over her shoulders. It had everything owned by Madayja stuffed away inside of it. It had been a long journey but it only took so long because she settled down in different places to work so she would have enough money for this place.

‘This place is bigger than anything I’ve ever seen. It’s like gonna be so much fun!’ said Madayja with bright eyes.

Fun wasn’t the only thing in her mind. When taking her first step into the school all she looked at were the cute men they had around here. That was all she was paying attention to anymore. The school was one of the best looking things she’d ever seen but it wasn’t anything compared to all the people around here. There were a lot of good looking girls around to but Madayja could handle competition. That was another reason why it was going to be fun.

‘I’m gonna love it here.’ exclaimed Madayja.

Her flirtatious natures kicked in really quickly when she saw a man who was all on his own walk right by her and take a glance in her direction. Madayja reached her arms around the mans nearest arm and batted her long gorgeous eyelashes at him. He stared at her once but then looked away really quickly. It made Madayja pretty sure she had gotten to him already. Madayja talked using her most sweet and cute voice.

‘Can you help me find my way around? I’m afraid I’ll get lost if there’s not a big strong man to look after me.’ asked Madayja.

She was right when she thought that he had already been taken in by her. Now he was just putty in her hands. Just like all the other boys she had been with. They’re so easy to bring down. It’s fun but really kinda pathetic. She thought. Madayja smiled cutely up at him because he agreed to help her find her way around. If all men here are this stupid then this will be easy. She thought.

Edited by: Madayja Hernandez at: 1/22/07 2:50 am
the flojo
Flojo Murasame
Vengeful Warrior

Ren Murasame
Crouching Tiger, Hidden Badness

Kenshin Tajiri
Ninja with Issues

Posts: 779
(1/19/07 2:56 pm)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
First off, your description, history, and personality are VERY short and aren't detailed. Please elaborate on those.

Secondly, for the "Sandstorm" power: is the illusion stationary? Can she move it? Does it move with her, or can she control it independently? How thick is the sandstorm? Can the power be resisted (a requirement for illusion powers on this board)?

The second power, "Bat Wings", needs to be described more accurately. How big are the wings? What do they look like? Can she only pull them out once a day for a full hour, or can she put them away and get them out again over multiple sessions spanning an hour's time?

Also, I don't understand by what logic having wings improve's one's jump height. Does she flap them after jumping to get more height? If so that needs to be explained in the power.

Your sample RP post is also lacking. Lengthen it. We want at least 3-4 GOOD paragraphs.

Lastly, your profile has many grammatical errors. Please proofread and fix them.

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Madayja Hernandez
Newly Registering Student
Posts: 2
(1/20/07 10:53 am)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
I edited it. I hope I got in everything you mentioned

the flojo
Flojo Murasame
Vengeful Warrior

Ren Murasame
Crouching Tiger, Hidden Badness

Kenshin Tajiri
Ninja with Issues

Posts: 780
(1/20/07 1:08 pm)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
First off, for the bat wing's description: what is "3x4 feet big"? I simply need a wingspan; the height will naturally be proportionate to that.

Secondly, while the appearance and personality are just passable, the history is not. You need to elaborate more on the bat wing power (where did it come from, how did she react to it) because no one just has a power out of nowhere and doesn't react at all surprised when they spontaneously sprout wings.

Also, convert your history into multiple paragraphs with space in between them. It's hard to read it as it is, in two huge unorganized and barely seperated paragraphs.

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Madayja Hernandez
Newly Registering Student
Posts: 3
(1/22/07 2:52 am)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
done

the flojo
Flojo Murasame
Vengeful Warrior

Ren Murasame
Crouching Tiger, Hidden Badness

Kenshin Tajiri
Ninja with Issues

Posts: 785
(1/22/07 2:01 pm)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
I suppose it's just good enough to make it through. You can go ahead and roleplay, but don't use any powers until an administrator approves them; alas, I cannot do so.

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DevJackson
Mr. Fix It
Posts: 383
(1/22/07 7:55 pm)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
Just need some clarification on your Sandstorm illusionary power. Is there any way for people to avoid seeing it? In the profile it just says it's a way to escape, but there has to be some way to see through the illusion.

Kobita
+195 posts
I don't follow directions

Posts: 797
(1/25/07 5:55 pm)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
I don't think that there needs to be a way to see through it. It just hinder's your ability to see. A sensible person could simply move out of the Sandstorm and then reasess her location. The sandstorm doesn't cause any physical or mental harm to the person, so seeing through it doesn't seem necessary.

Merciah
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Karrody de`Champion
AKA Scarey Guy

Posts: 4292
(1/25/07 11:56 pm)
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Re: Madayja Hernandez
I think what Dev meant was. Is there anyway to avoid seeing the sandstorm. As though the illusion was successful to few, or outright failed. There might be those that are able to see through it knowing that it isn't real, so the illusion is seen through in that aspect.




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