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Well, its the weekend here at MHS. Wouldn't it be great if all schools started on a Friday for the first day of school. What a way to start off. You get a weekend right after your first day. Well, this is because we are done with the first day of class. How so you ask. As you only went to one class. yes, but I am sure that doing the same thing for each class would get boring. So the one class you experienced is basically how all the classes are going to be.
Teacher posts role. Day gets started, end of class happens, everyone goes to their next class, or home..
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Appearance:
Her dress is blue and ruffly at the bottom, then a lighter blue, then a darker blue with a gold design on her stomach, the white at the top. Her hair is dark blue and her skin is light with a tint of tan coloring. Her eyes are dark blue. She has one scar on the thigh of her leg because when she was being taken away she grabbed the table and caught her leg on a chair and tore the skin, she let no one see it and sewed it up herself with thread and needle.
She wears a very light bluish teal scarf with tuffs at the end. In her hair she has a feather with a blue stone in the middle, she also has gold rings wrapped around parts of her hair. Her eyebrows are a dark brown. Around her neck she wears feathers with a blue stone in the middle. Her figure is tall, but slim with no curves. Her arms have no muscles as she is delicate with her body.
Personality: Know one sees the side of her that use to be her everyday self. She seems like a boss and a snob. She has constant mood swings, but this is all because of her past which has put her into misery and so she shows her evil side to people not wanting to get close to anyone. Her real self is kind and would never do anything wrong, but that side disappeared two years ago.
The side of her that disappeared is kind and gentle, and would not do anything to hurt anyone. She was kind and loving to every soul just like every soul was to her. If she walked into a room and someone was being rude they would immediately stop and be angels. She touched people with her kindness, but now her lack of heart pushes people away from her.
Special Power: Super Run
Olivia discovered she could run at a speed of 30 mph when she was 11. She drank some water out of a spring and later discovered that it gave people special powers. She often uses it to play pranks on people. Olivia can only run up to 30 mph at the time, but would be able to go faster if she practiced more often. She needs a good source of energy in her body to be able to make it over ten mph hour.
Icicle
A year after that she decided to see if she drank out of the spring again if she would get another power. She once again had some water out of the spring and discovered she could freeze things, but she has a hard time controlling the power. If she looses her temper with someone she might freeze something around them on accident. For Olivia to be able to freeze something there needs to be air with moister around, which their usually is unless there is a fire. Olivia can freeze everything except fire, she can freeze things at -20 at the highest, but usually -10. It usually takes about two minutes before something freezes, but it can take one minute if she uses a lot of energy.
History: Olivia was a girl of three when her parents died. She had a 13 year old sister who was like her mother, know one knew this as Olivia would have been taken away from Kristi if anyone were to know. When Olivia was four someone found out about her living with her sister who was now 14 She was taken to a foster family who lived on a far.
When she arrived they told her never to drink from the spring. Olivia had been curious for so many years about why they did not what her drinking from the spring. When she was ten she could not hold off her curiosity any longer. She drank from the spring and a year later powers kicked in. She told know one about them until one day she got mad at her boyfriend, Josh and froze him. He died because he was frozen. Her foster parents obviously knew her special power now and so they decided to look up schools for kids with special powers. They sent her to Manga High to get control of her powers. They also hoped it would take her four years to get control of her powers so they would never have to see her again.
Growing up with a family she didn't know was hard. They gave her the chore of taking care of all the horses. They had ten horses and she had to give them baths, pick there feet out, brush them, feed them, clean there stalls out, and any other things the horses needed. She didn't go to school, she worked all day and had no time to meet people or enjoy herself. This contributed to her becoming a mean and angry person.
Relationships
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Hates:
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Dating:
EXAMPLE ROLE-PLAYING POST: Kouseki walked down the dark path looking around, but not seeing anyone disappointed her. She stopped on a rock and set her bag down, looked around and noticed nothing other than trees. She sat on the rock and stared out at the path. She wondered know one was out, then stared at the sky and realized there would soon be a rain storm. She suddenly stood up and started walking through the patch of trees. It then started raining and Kouseki ran looking thoroughly at every tree until she found one with a big hole in it. Kouseki through her bag in the tree and then jumped in. She started looking in her bag and pulled out a smaller bag. She opened in and counted her money and realized she did not even have enough to buy ramen at her favorite place. She jumped out of the tree, grabbed her bag and started running through the rain. She suddenly stopped in the middle of the pathway and just stared up at the sky. She saw someone in the distance and walked the opposite way of fear that they would try to persuade her out of the rain.
Edited by: beth8194 at: 2/1/07 9:37 pm
Normally I'd delete this post and send you a PM, but since your ezInbox is disabled, I'll say it here: posting incomplete profiles is against the rules. Go read the rules, then do your application.
Now, this is FAR too short. I want you to elaborate significantly on everything. At least two to three GOOD paragraphs for appearance and personality, a better explanation of the powers, their limits and source, and at least four or five paragraphs of history that develops your character somewhat. Your Sample RP is also rather short and bland; it needs to be better if you want to be accepted.
Also, you have several grammar and usage errors (twice you've replace the word "no" with "know"). Please find these errors and fix them.
Re: Olivia
I wouldn't advise trusting computers on spelling and grammar; they're often wrong. It's impossible to program a computer to perfectly detect all mistakes in English language, and they often misinterpret correct usage as a grammatical error.
Nothing can replace good old-fashioned proofreading.
Re: Olivia
Okay, It is looking better. But certain areas still need more.
Your history. It needs to be longer. Much longer. It is to abrupt and way to short. For help. Think of some of the people she would have known growing up. Put something in there. Anything she might have done growing up on a farm. Did she always have to milk cows? Or was she lucky and never had to do that? Give us a little bit of a story here.
Also your second power. Icicle.
Give me a threshold for how cold she can make things. Not everything frezes at the same temperature. Can she only freeze things that freeze when water does, or can she freeze mercury. I need examples and details.
Also, proof read your character profile. Just read through it and you'll catch things. There are quite a few things that you'll notice are wrong just by reading through it.
This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)
Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.
^Karrody's wheels
I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart
Re: Olivia Erickson
I still need a maximum for what degree she can drop the temperature of an object. For example, Can she take anything down to 32 degrees Farheinheit (sp?) (0 degrees celcius) Which is the temperature water freezes at sea level. Or can she drop it to something much lower?
This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)
Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.
^Karrody's wheels
I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart
Re: Olivia Erickson
When you say "at below 100" or "at below 70," what do you mean? I'm kind of confused. Does this mean the object will hit a temperature of -100, or anything that has a core temperature of below 100 can be frozen? Either way, you'll have to lower the freezing power and maybe add on an amount of time it takes to freeze something.
Re: Olivia Erickson
I posted a reply already. But for some reason it never showed up. Are you stating degrees in Celsius, or fahrenheit?
This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)
Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.
^Karrody's wheels
I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart
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