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darkbartje
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(11/2/06 7:40 am)
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Ryo Tsukasari
well this seems interesting so i would like to join if im allowed

Name: Ryo Tsukasari

Age: 18

Grade: 9

Appearance: has short blue hair , is of medium lenght ,wears a brown jeans and and a simple white shirt . has green eye's



Personality: kind , soft hearted guy who is a little inresponible
hate's fighting , and always try's to solve problem's with words
doesnt make friends fast but when you become one you have a trustworthy brave mate who will sacrefice his life in order to
protect you . reacts always kind to other peaple , mayby too kind , always gets sad when he speaks of his parents

Special Power :

Dragon transforming (is still locked , look history for more info):

when ryo gets angry or is mortaly wounded he transforms
intro a fearfull dragonic creature , depending on how he feels
his form chances

Dragon warrior : red wing's grow out of his back , and
his body become a as hard as steel, this happens when
ryo is wounded heavy durring a fight

Dragon (stronger form) : changes intro a winged dragon ,
breath's fire and
uses claw's to rip his enemy's appard ,this happens when
ryo is in his dragon warrior form and he gets too hard
motivated by the fighting he changes intro a dragon

Kaiser form : changes intro the king of dragon's this form
is verry powerfull and can nearly obliberate any enemy
but ryo loses control in this form
this form almost never appear , only when ryo is realy
schocked ( like when a friend gets killed )

Seconde power : healing

Ryo uses his hand's to send magical energy too the target
to heal his ally's
while Ryo hate's fighting he offten can be found healing
other peaple becouse of his kindness

History:

Ryo lived his whole live peacefully in a little town far
away from civilization
together with his father and mother his live seemed
perfect , but little did he knew the truth ..
at the age of 15 his father revealed to ryo that ryo had
dragon blood in his veins , his father explained he
was they both where the last living member's of the dragoons
human's who where gifted with dragonic power's
to protect the earth
but His father forbidded ryo to use his power's and so sealed
his power's away that they woulnt chause any problem's
but he told ryo a way to break them
"if you are in life danger or when a friend of you is , your
power's will awaken" is what his father sayd
but that night a group of humans came too the village
and slaughtered anyone
his father explained to ryo , that he coulnt protect
the village becouse when he gave birth to ryo
he gave his power's also
so he hidded ryo in a hidden basement and then
2 man dressed in black entered the house
and a fight between them and his dad arived
but in the end his father was defeated by the reinforcemens
and murdered , after the men left ryo came out of his hiding spot
and cried over the death body's of his parent's
that day on ryo promised his parents he would
never use his power's to hurt peaple , he even despised
fighting .

many hours passed untill a young lady found ryo
and he explained everything to her , ambout him
his power's , and the murderers
the lady then told her name ( it was Elena)
and she comforted ryo
after she burried a grave for his parent's Elena asked
ryo what he wanted to do
he sayd he dint knew what to do
She then revealed she was a doctor who was able
to use magical power's to heal peaple
and she took ryo in as a apprentice
so 3 years passed and ryo decided to move
too this place called Manga high school
becouse he heard there where many peaple of his age there
and also becouse he wanted to use his healing magic
for them

Relationships
---------------
Mortal Enemy:
Hates:
Dislikes:
Friends:
Good Friends:
Family: ryudo Tsukasari and Hellena Diseni ( both died) ,Elena
Likes:
Dating:


EXAMPLE ROLE-PLAYING POST : ( this is a post
from one of my 2 charachter's i play in a roleplay based
on the anime called shuffle!

After mayumi fled from the big scary guy who attacked her she runed away from the mad groupies who where chasing her she runed downstair toward the sport fields where the field and track team just finished doing there midday activety and mayumi hided behind a little building at the edge of the run tracks

"oeff i hope i be safe her for a while" mayumi sayd while looking around her

most of the girl's and guy's from the track and field team where busy returning too the classes
from behind the cornor Mayumi was looking at a girl who whas talking with a guy
near her hiding spot

"hmm"

The guy turned around and mayumi was just able to hide in time

"whats wrong sempai ?" a girl asked
"nothing kana-chan , well you better get back too the lessions they are going to begin" the guy answered
"okay , see you later sempai !" the girl replyd and mayumi heard footsteps runing away

"i think i remain here for a while" Mayumi sayd while she putted her back aigens the wall panting softly
from all the runing

"Mayumi Thyme , so it was you that i saw runing toward here" a voice sayd and mayumi turned around
saw the black haired guy she saw at the field a while ago , he looked pretty handsome

"i dont care anymore !! do wathever you want" Mayumi sayd sadly
"dont worry , im not one of those groupies" The guy answered smiling
"then how do you know my name ?" Mayumi asked
" ohh i forgot to introduce myself , im yamato , im in the same class as Asa shigure" The guy sayd
"ohh that means your a sempai" Mayumi replyd
"yea im also the captain of the runing team" yamato sayd
"ohh you cant believe how glad i am you arent one of those crazy groupie's yamato-sempai" Mayumi sayd
"wanna explain how comes you awakened the anger of so many guy's ?" Yamato sayd grining
"well it kind of complicated" Mayumi sayd smiling

And so mayumi started explaining everything

"see and after i sayd those thing's i kind of felt guilty but they keep on chasing me so im unable to
go and say sorry to rin-chan and sia-chan" Mayumi sayd
"well that was kind of stupid of you to do" Yamato sayd laughing
"bha dont laugh at me , im feeling misserable you know" Mayumi sayd giggeling
"hehe comme comme , but you sure must have quite some stamina to be able to run all day" Yamato sayd
"well you cant keep on hiding from then forever" Yamato sayd
"but they kill me when they see me" Mayumi sayd sadly
"hmm thats true" Yamato sayd
"i would be able to return too the class but i never be able to leave school alive" Mayumi sayd
"well i think i know a idea then" Yamato sayd with a smile
"and what would that be ?" Mayumi asked
"well i can guide you too the class and come and get you early out of it also ,i got training after the
lessions anyway" Yamato sayd
"and what would the trade of the deal be then ?" Mayumi asked
"hmm your pretty fast , why dont you come too the training after school ?" Yamato replyd
"joining the field and track team ?" Mayumi asked
"yep , thats a fair trade , you dont need to join , just come for a trial" Yamato sayd
"okay i come for the trial after school today then" Mayumi sayd with a smile
"hehe thats great , arigato" Yamato sayd
"well lets head too the class then shall we yamato-sempai ?" Mayumi sayd with a smile
"yea , i think those groupies went back too there class" Yamato replyd
"lets go then" Mayumi answered

And so the 2 of them went too the class and at mayumi's classroom

"see you later yamato-sempai" mayumi sayd while bowing , and after that she opened the door and
entered the classroom


well hope this is a good application
( sorry for my bad english , im from belgium)

im not realy interested in the fighting , more in the roleplaying
so if my power's need to chance its not a problem


(also the dragon power's are still locked becouse
ryo dint came in a life treating crissis yet)

well hope to hear from you soon

the flojo
Flojo Murasame
Vengeful Warrior

Ren Murasame
Crouching Tiger, Hidden Badness

Kenshin Tajiri
Ninja with Issues

Posts: 752
(12/20/06 3:36 pm)
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Re: Ryo Tsukasari
First off, you will need to fix your spelling and grammar errors. ALL of them. I understand that you are Belgian, but writing is the primary means of RP on this board, so you will need to improve your English if you wish to RP here.

You will need to expound on your character's appearance and personality. What you have now isn't nearly enough.

As for your powers, you can only have two, and every extra possible transformation counts as an extra power. In addition, you need to set limits on his healing power.

Also, your sample RP post isn't very good, in particular the overabundance of dialogue and lack of variety in vocabulary. Try ti fix it up a bit.

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There is a state that a martial artist can reach, a state where he ceases to be an individual person, but instead becomes a living, breathing representation of his art. This state of perfection is called Shin no Mushin. It is my only goal.

the flojo
Flojo Murasame
Vengeful Warrior

Ren Murasame
Crouching Tiger, Hidden Badness

Kenshin Tajiri
Ninja with Issues

Posts: 759
(12/23/06 11:17 am)
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Re: Ryo Tsukasari
I have recently discovered that your character is a copy of a Breath of Fire character. This is NOT allowed. Read the rules (it's apparent you haven't if you thought you could get away with this) then redo your application in its entirety.

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There is a state that a martial artist can reach, a state where he ceases to be an individual person, but instead becomes a living, breathing representation of his art. This state of perfection is called Shin no Mushin. It is my only goal.

Merciah
Merciah Forigaln
Self Proclaimed Protector of MHS
Karrody de`Champion
AKA Scarey Guy

Posts: 4286
(1/25/07 11:17 pm)
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Re: Ryo Tsukasari
I am not sure if you are returning. But to insure that everyone knows that We don't give up on you guys I'll still reply.

If no reply has been received I will delete this at the end of the month.

Due to the information learned by The Flojo, I have nothing to say other then this profile will be deleted at months end if no reply is heard.




This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)

Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.



^Karrody's wheels


I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart





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