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angrymexican
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(10/18/06 2:27 pm)
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Shun kazuma


Age:15

Grade:10th

Apperance:shun is 5'10 ht skinny short he weights 145 pounds(he is a human being) he has a tan skin he talks alot to in school spiky hair blue eyes he wears a hat he wears a school uniform black pant white shirt he is antletic plays all sports foot ball,base ball, and basket ball.he wears no jewelry.but he is a lady's man.

Personally:Shun Kazuma is a kid that has fun in school he talks to girls but plays sports alway ready to helphe laughs at any joke he tells you but when it come to girls he goes to serious he tells the girls that he lves him.He provides help to his friends when they ask him he thinks on his feet when in trouble.

Special powers:shun kazuma controls ice he inherit this powers by his ancestors they were pass down by generation by generation his father had them his grandfather had and his great grandfather had this powers and so on till the fudal era.

History:Shun knows his family's history because his grandfahter he learned that his ancestors were hated people because the powers they control, the village they lived in was small in the edge of the forest people tried to killed tem many times they faught to many battles against the village many times untill oneday that a large spider attack the village the spider did some damage his ancestor faught this spider trying to protect the village they defeated this spider but they lost one of the members of the family. Thanks to shun's ancestors the family got the respect from the village.

Relationships:-------
Mortal enemies:------
Hates:sour candies
Dislike: waking up on Monday mornings
Friends: Joe, mike, and kyle
Goodfriends: mike, and kyle Joe,
Famliy:Grandpa,mom,dad,two younger brothers
Likes:chocolates,dating,basketball
Dating:dates any girl he sees

Example role play:It was morning on a rainy day shun was walking on the alley by himself thinking of nothing and all the sudden something strikes him on the face he reacts all suprised and scare because on one messes with him so he is looking for the person who threw that white enrgy ball he checks all the yards and he sees the person who threw that white ball of energy at him he he chases him through these yards full of dogs this guy is moving quick he catches him its his friend joe.they Both started laughing they walked to school and stop to pick up mike The mom told him taht he already left for school they ask her,"what is the time"? "She answers it is 8:35" as soon as they heard the time they ran as fast as they can to the school before the tardy bell ran they got their late anyway.The teacher ask them "why are you late"? They couldn't say a word so they had to sit down. Three hours past by they all gather on the lunch room to talk their buiness."so what is going on today" nothing hey you guies i heard there is going to be a fight between our rival schools we should help our peers when is it after schools a group of kids are going to invade the other schools you guies want to come sure we will meet at the back of the stairs.




Shun kazuma

Edited by: angrymexican at: 11/9/06 2:44 pm
Merciah
Merciah Forigaln
Self Proclaimed Protector of MHS
Karrody de`Champion
AKA Scarey Guy

Posts: 4175
(10/18/06 3:11 pm)
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Re: shun Kazuma
I'm guessing that this is still in the works?????

Aswell, I am really hoping that it is still in the works too. ^_^




This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)

Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.



^Karrody's wheels


I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart





Merciah
Merciah Forigaln
Self Proclaimed Protector of MHS
Karrody de`Champion
AKA Scarey Guy

Posts: 4189
(10/21/06 10:59 am)
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Re: shun Kazuma
Can you please bold your titles. Thanks

First thing..

Can you add more to gis personallity. Tell me about his quirks and the things that make him tick. You don't need a lot more, as right now it is average, but wow me. Make it better then average....

Your powers. First off, it isn't descriptive enough. Secondly, elemental powers are locked for anyone and everyone, unless you can make the power very original. Also, you get two powers to start with if you want a second one.

Your history. What you have is a nice addition, but that is his family history. What we are looking for is your characters history. Such as what he went through in his life for his first 15 years of life, as he is 15 years old.

Your relationships section. This is left blank except for family. The whole area is for people. That would be people he hates, people he dislikes, people he likes and whom ever he would be dating. Not the things he likes and dislikes. Add those things that you put down as his likes and dislikes to his personality, as that is where they would go.

P.S. Sorry I didn't reply sooner. I've been kinda busy. :(




This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)

Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.



^Karrody's wheels


I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart





Merciah
Merciah Forigaln
Self Proclaimed Protector of MHS
Karrody de`Champion
AKA Scarey Guy

Posts: 4283
(1/25/07 11:12 pm)
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Re: Shun kazuma
I am not sure if you are returning. But to insure that everyone knows that We don't give up on you guys I'll still reply.

If no reply has been received I will delete this at the end of the month.

First and fore most. Punctuation and spelling needs to be done. If you need a spell check. In the RP Help Forum there is a link to a program you can download for free.

The powers, personality and appearence all need more detail.

Your likes and dislikes, that is for people your character likes and dislikes not objects. Those would go in your characters personality.




This is where I put more of my random thoughts. :)

Has everyone heard, there have been attacks in the forest. More and more students are showing up in Mrs Hanabishi's ward by the day. What's going on. It's the talk of the school.



^Karrody's wheels


I don't make threats or bribes.
Promises and incentives are more my style
-M.Hart





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