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Name:Sopatelas
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Age: 14
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Grade: 9th
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Appearance: Sopatelas is a young boy. He has short black hair and hazel eyes. He usually wears a long black trench coat and black shirts and pants. He has a cross shapped scar on his back. His canine teeth are alittle longer than most humans. He has a mystical sword called Soulblade on his back.

I would like to see a little more in this section but it isn't required of you.

Personality: Sopatelas mostly likes to be alone, so he can think. He is usually friendly and understanding to everyone but if he is not in a good mood he will tell you. He has had a bad life and tries to hide that so no one will know but every once and awhile he lets it slip to his closest friends.

Again...I'd like to see more, but I won't require it of you.

Special Power: Wind Movement- Sopatelas has the power to control the wind. At its lowest level he can do nothing but pick up minor things and throw them at things. The stronger he gets the bigger the things get and he can pick himself up to make him fly.

No, if you read the rules on locked powers you'd see powers using the wind are locked unless incredibly creative, and sorry but this isn't.

Soulreaver- This power has the ability to take a living things soul and give it to Sopatelas to boost his skills. It comes from his sword. At its lowest level he can only take souls from small creatures like rabbits and cats but as he becomes more skilled he can take souls from larger animals and eventually humans, demons, and etc.

I'm almost certain this is not allowed, especially from Humans. If I was the final say on it I'd say no right now. I'll wait for an admin to comment on this but I'd telling you right now I doubt it will work.

History: Sopatelas was born in a small town in Mexico. His parents are Sukri and Nanku. Sukri is a human women who was raped by Nanku, a demon. Sukri gave birth to Sopatelas and lived long enough to name his. For years after that he lived with his grandparents. They ignored him like he wasn't even there. He went to a human school but when he completed junior high he heard someone talking about Manga High School. So, he decided to try and enter the school.

Ok this needs more to it. I'm certain a lot more would happen to a half demon. Which brings me to something else thats locked, demons. But there should be a lot more that have happened to a fourteen year old then this, half-demon or no. Like his mystical sword, where did he get it? How did he find out about it? People don't just magically have a mystical sword when they wake up in the morning. And if he did, tell us.

Relationships
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Mortal Enemy:
Hates:grandparents
Dislikes:
Friends:
Good Friends:
Family:
Likes:
Dating:

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EXAMPLE ROLE-PLAYING POST: Cane was watching Sakura and Taria in the corner. They looked scared out of there wits. Something landed infront of the door. Cane turned around and faced the door when it flew open and pinned him to the wall. A dark man entered the tree house, he had long blood red hair and matching eyes. He was wearing demonic looking armor and had a blood-stainded sword at his side. He looked around and saw Sakura and Taria cowering in the corner and laughed. He spoke to them "Where is the boy?" Cane gasped from behind the door and kicked it at the man. The man cut it to shreads with his hand and the parts left fell to the ground.

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