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Dragonites no1fan
Dragonite Master
Posts: 133
(11/18/03 11:52 pm)


Hmmmm........pretty close......
OOC: Jacob, you basicaly got Albrecth's personality right. He would have said basicaly what you had him say, but with one difference.....He's normaly not that straight-forward. He'd have suggested those things in a subtle manner, but not openly stated them. But kudos on your subtle hinting at who his new crush is! Anybody who's been here at least since I first joined this add-on could probably guess who she is....

Anyway, no time to write anything right now....I'll post tomorrow.

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Doctor Jukiba
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Posts: 8
(11/19/03 11:14 pm)


Re: Halloween/Thanksgiving Add-On!
Ock stopped running and began to think. After a moment, he was certain he'd straightened out everything they'd asked him.

With a nod, he started to head back slowly. He just came back to where the people who'd come through the painting were at as one of them said "Well, now what do we do?"

"You follow me!" Ock grunted.

Several of the people jumped.

Ock waved his arm in a "Follow me" sort of gesture.

He turned around and began to walk. Shrugging, the first of them began to follow him. Before long, all of them were following.

Before long, he came to a wall. He turned to those following him. "Just ignore wall. You go right through." he said confidently. With that, he walked through it.

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Shiny Espeon
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Posts: 95
(11/20/03 5:48 pm)


Re: Halloween/Thanksgiving Add-On!
wow.... *blink*
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I really hope this works... I thought to myself as I watched Ock walk straight through the wall. I walked up to the wall, and poked it cautiously. It quivered a bit, and then went still again. I walked straight at it, and instead of crashing, I slid through it. It had a very cold, jello-like feel to it. SE soon followed, as well as Horun.

"Well, that's something I'll not want to experience again anytime soon, that wall was weird," Horun muttered.

"Then why didn't you just slip out of the realm the normal way for dark types, and save yourself the trouble?" SE asked while smirking.

"Uh.... 'cause I didn't feel like it! So there!" Horun retorted, and then ran off to find something to eat.

Wolvite and Dusty followed shortly after, as well as anyone else who felt like leaving.
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that's all

~Shiny Espeon

For anyone who cares, I am the freak formerly known as lilangel. w0o7. Go me. *jumps off a cliff*

I have gone to find myself. If I get back before I return, keep me here.

spectacular suicune
Jade, Friend of Wolvite
(and all things pink and fluffy)

Posts: 279
(11/20/03 9:07 pm)


Re: Halloween/Thanksgiving Add-On!
Wolvite

Now that we had escaped the realms of the painting, I decided now would be a good time to explore the house again. Walking about, I went up stairs...and more stairs...and more stairs until I reached the top. When I got to a window, I looked out and saw that you could see for miles to the east and south. Looking about, I saw a strange shape outside. Curiousity getting the best of me, I use my ice to break the window and create a path to the ground, which I use to escape from the house and head towards the shape.

OoC: that's all for now.

~Jade, who will bbl...

You mean you can put something worthwhile down here? Interesting...

Queen Metroid
Member
Posts: 43
(11/21/03 11:24 am)


Re: Halloween/Thanksgiving Add-On!
Heather

"So," asked Lleowyn, having just finished the pumpkin while the two of us had been talking, "what happens if you meet the 'right one' and he doesn't like you."

With an evil grin, I said "Well, I've got a secret weapon for something like that. Have you ever heard of the Kashi Weirding?"

"No, I can't say that I have....."

"Well, ages ago, in a far-distant country, there was an infamous temptress. By day, she seemed an ordinary woman, nothing overly special about her. But by night, she seemed to transform completely, becoming the most beautiful creature around, with the most enticing body the area had ever seen. For years, the women of the village she lived in begged her to tell her secret. But she would never tell. Finaly, when the woman drew near her death, she decided to tell her secret. But she was senile from age and could only remember half of the ritual that induced her nightly transformation. For years, women far and wide tried to unlock the other half of the secret. Finaly, in a mysterious village called Kashi, the women of the place discovered the way to transform themselves as the temptress had. They named the ritual the 'Kashi Weirding'. Throughout the ages, all forgot the way to perform the Weirding. All but one family, whose ancestor from Kashi had passed the knowledge on to her daughter who, in turn, passed it on to hers. Throughout the ages, this family passed the knowledge on from generation to generation, mother to daughter time and time again. Until it reached the most recent passing on......that of from my mother to me."

The Venusaur who called himself Sol said "This all sounds very interesting, but very....shall we say....fantastic. Can you prove any of this?"

I smiled. I closed my eyes and began to chant arcane words from a long-forgotten language. It took a while for anything to happen, but all of a sudden, I became considerably taller. My barely-visible curves became sharper and more defined. Several inches of excess fat melted away to nothing. Several areas on my face shifted, some parts becoming firmer, others less so. Some parts became flatter and others rounder. When I opened my eyes, every mouth around the room was hanging wide open.

"Holy crap!" Jakoven exclaimed. "If I was straight, I'd be putty in your hands!"

Just then, Rowen walked in. He didn't seem to recognize me. I smirked internaly. This should be good.

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Shiny Espeon
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(baha!)

Posts: 96
(11/21/03 6:39 pm)


Re: Halloween/Thanksgiving Add-On!
... o...kay....
----Horun---------------
After trying not to kill SE, I wandered downstairs to get some food. As I got closer to the kitchen, I noticed a bunch of people, mainly guys were crowded around in it. I nearly collided with Rowen as I pushed through the crowd to see what was going on.

"Sorry, I- huh?" I looked up at the table.

Sitting there was the thing everyone was staring at. It was a Sneasel, and it looked like it was under some sort of spell. She was more... curved, I guess you could say, and I swear I saw people drooling.

"So she's pretty. I've seen better, just not in awhile..." I muttered to myself while passing her.

I found the fridge, and began rummaging through it. I found some fresh peanut butter, and a slice of steak. Then I went over to the cabinet and pulled out some white bread and marshmellow. I made a peanut butter and marshmellow sandwhich, and used the microwave to cook the steak.
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That's all for now

Shiny Espeon- merf

[edit] Figures... I can't read anymore :p [/edit]

For anyone who cares, I am the freak formerly known as lilangel. w0o7. Go me. *jumps off a cliff*

I have gone to find myself. If I get back before I return, keep me here.

Edited by: Shiny Espeon at: 11/21/03 9:47 pm
Rickie Tahn
Casino Kingpin
Posts: 18
(11/23/03 3:31 am)


Re: Halloween/Thanksgiving Add-On!
0.0 I've been away for WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY too long!!!!! Anyway, time to write......

Character:
Name-Dralnu
Gender-None (It's species has no gender for they need not reproduce. Used to be male.)
Species-A race of undead Pokemon with necromantic magic (Meaning they can raise the dead, making new undead creatures from corpses.) known as Lich. Liches can be in the form of any given species. Dralnu possesses the body of a former human.
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General naration from no particular character:

Midnight. All Hallow's Eve was fully at hand. Deep within the confines of the mansion's dungeon, an ancient pressence stirred. It sensed something it had not in countless ages. There were invaders in it's house......on it's night......

The entire building trembled as an unearthly roar reverberated throughout the halls.
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Dralnu

I awoke. It had taken many eons, but the seal had finaly been broken. The seal.....I remembered well the words of how the seal worked......

"This seal will hold you and your power for years to come. Only the pressence of a being not of the night will break it. And only at the hour that All Hallow's Eve is fully realized...."

I grinned nastily. I would have to repay those who had loosed me. They would have to be given the same immortality I had realized.

The seal had kept back the effects of time. Now, the deffensive magics I'd placed upon myself so many ages ago, and that were once more taking effect, kept back the same. As I had been revived shortly after my death, my muscles felt no decay and were not weakened. I still possessed all of the considerable physical strength I'd had in life.

I punched up through the stone floor that had been placed over me in case the seal should be broken. Several more punches rendered a hole that I was able to squeeze through.

I looked casualy around and, shortly spotting a ramp that lead upward, started forward. I quickly came to a trap door of sorts. I slid through it and into the basement of the main mansion.

Nothing caught my eye as I ambled slowly down the halls of the mansion and out into the graveyard.

It was time to awaken some helpers. I reached into the earth with my power. At the first spot I searched, I found nothing for several minutes. Finaly, under hundreds of miles of soil, I found something. In a flash, I had surfaced the remains. It was only skeletal. All flesh and organs had long ago disintegrated. The bones formed into the shape of some primitive bird creature.

I called forth into the great beyond, beckoning the poor wretch's spirit to come forth and retake what remained of it's body.

All at once, the skeleton sprang to life. It looked around with empty sockets, seeing all despite it's lack of actual eyes. And it spoke despite it's lack of actual method to do so.

"I.....I am alive again?" it stammered.

"Not exactly." I said. "You are undead. Tell me....who are you? What creature is this whose reanimated body now stands before me?"

"In life, my name was Torma. Afterwards, I was not known but to a select few for several years. Then, I eventualy became known as Gin-Geku."

"So you're the Overlord of Blood! What wonderful luck to have one so grand as you serving under me! What became of you? How did your spirit depart from it's magnificent ghostly body?"

"It was all due to an impudent young prince named Albrecth. Please......help me find the little wretch! If you'll help me to find him so that I might kill him, I'll be content. I'll do anything you wish of me after that blessed event."

"Very well. We shall find this......Albrecth......."

Just then, a strange wolfish creature came tromping up from the direction of the mansion.

"Aaaaahhhhhh......." mused Gin-Geku. "I know this one! She is called Wolvite."

"Imagine a business where people hand you money, and you hand them back.....absolutely nothing."
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"It takes a tough man to make a tender.....chicken."
~Ben, Short Circuit 2
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Please come to Llawan's Palace!
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Boredom is the root of all evil.

Edited by: Rickie Tahn at: 11/24/03 2:33 pm
spectacular suicune
Jade, Friend of Wolvite
(and all things pink and fluffy)

Posts: 280
(11/23/03 11:50 am)


Wow...
OoC: Um....no offense, but if this is part of a fic, please refrain from using it. Just use characters from your fics, not events. Thanks! If it's not part of a fic, than can we please have a bit of background, because while it may make sense to some, others it's confusing for *raises hand* like me.

BiC:

Wolvite

I slowed down as I saw a human in the graveyard, standing near a skeleton that was alive. Narrowing my eyes and tilting my head, like I do when I'm trying to figure out something, I totally stop when I hear the strange skeletal bird say my name.

"And pray tell, sir, how do you know of me? You don't look familiar..."

~Jade, la la la...

Rickie Tahn
Casino Kingpin
Posts: 20
(11/24/03 2:49 pm)


Wow what?
OOC: Better post this fast.....the boss could be here for inspection any minute.....As for your question, that was not from a fan fic. Dralnu is a brand new character I'm introducing for this and future add-ons. Ages ago, his empire of undead minions and what not became so powerful that the people and Pokemon of the world feared he would slay and revive all of them, so they destroyed his minions, his city, his palace, everything that belonged to him. Afterward, they forced him to a place where they used a powerful binding power to seal away him and his powers. But there was no way of stopping the seal from breaking if it came under the influence of too much dark power, something that has happened now. The theory is that Halloween night, at midnight, the powers of darkness are at their strongest world wide. The "Creature not of the night" was necessary to excite the dark spirits dwelling in the mansion, causing their power to even further strain the seal until it broke. Anyway.....on with the story!

IC:
Gin-Geku shook his skeletal head pityingly. "Of course I don't look familiar. When you last saw me, I was in the form of a highly powerful ghost. My name is Gin-Geku."

"Wait a minute...." Wolvite thought aloud. "Isn't that the name of the guy that prince battled a few months ago?"

"That's me, allright."

"And we all thought we'd seen the last of you....."

"As did I......So. Where is Albrecth, anyway?"

Wolvite gave a suspicious look. "Why do you want to know?"

"Because, my dear, naiive girl, I intend to seek revenge."

"Imagine a business where people hand you money, and you hand them back.....absolutely nothing."
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"It takes a tough man to make a tender.....chicken."
~Ben, Short Circuit 2
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Please come to Llawan's Palace!
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Boredom is the root of all evil.

Doctor Jukiba
Member
Posts: 9
(12/5/03 1:21 pm)


Shouldn't that wow be in quotation marks?
OOC: Actually, after they walked through the wall, I was planning on having them continue wandering in the dark world for some time before he lead them out the exit, a portal in the chest of a troll statue on the thirteenth floor of the mansion. Oh, well.....can't be helped now.

IC:
Ock stiffened. The seal! How could he have forgotten?! This must have been what the dog had been hinting at with the dark tones in which he had said the word "party".

Ock stood up and ran all out toward the area where all the ghosts met. He had to try and calm them. But even as he ran, he knew it was too late.

Sure enough, just as he was turning the first corner, the chimes began. The haunting grandfather clock even he and Rowen, and, indeed, even the ghosts and their lord, could not find began it's once-a-year announcement of the arrival of Halloween midnight.

Ock slumped to the floor in defeat. "May the gods help us all." he muttered under his breath.

The chiming stopped. There was a moment of silence, the air pregnant with suspense. Then came a roar. The hair-raising roar, which reverberated throughout the entire mansion and shook the walls with it's shear volume, sounded as though it had come from a beast from the deapest depths of hell itself.

To those close to the entrance of the basement, as Ock was, came a dull, far-off thudding noise. Each thud was followed by a crash.

"Here it come." Ock whispered, standing up, stiff from horror.

He creaped slowly sideways to the nearest door, then backwards through it. Lots of very confused and frightened-looking Pokemon stood around the kitchen he'd entered.

An unusually beautiful Sneasel sitting at the table said "Mr. Ogre-thing, what's going on?"

But he held a single finger to his lips and shook his head in a warning manner as he heard the footsteps of the creature plodding along through the hallway just outside the door.

Once the sound had gone past the door, Ock gathered up his nerve and took a daring look outside. There it was. The creature that would surely be the death of every creature within the building. Psychics and beasts of the night would be able to see what the others could not: The aura of extreme, raw dark power that eminated from the creature.

The Sneasel, who had come to take a look as well, asked "What WAS that thing?!" after it had left.

"Dralnu." Ock spat the name as though a filthy swear word. Indead, it had become such in the ancient times. "The dark lord. It be back. It try to kill you all. You better hide."

"What about you?" asked a Venusaur.

"Me no need hide. It only kill those not Ghost or Dark. But you better be not seen."

Please come to my lab!

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