All I have to say is you go Riss...I was all giddy when she stood up to Elthis...I was thinking how it was so congruent with the picture I drew of her with the wings...well because I am single minded and self centered that way.
And yeah since I Beta read that one part I don't think I am best to comment on that...er... I want so for Kalin and Riss to be together, but they aren't you could like see that coming from the beginning and it makes me cry *tear*. I don't know much about Erra just yet, I hope he gets some more character development and stuff. If not in this season then the next maybe.
"I'm a girl Goddamnit I want to do girly things!"